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Author Topic: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin  (Read 79659 times)

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #270 on: July 03, 2014, 09:28:34 am »

HOORAY for an update! 
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I am quite looking forward to the next 20 or 30 years or so of developmental madness

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #271 on: July 10, 2014, 12:54:38 pm »

    Nearly one hundred Dwarves at a dead run made up the military push approaching the forest's edge. Were there a benevolent god watching down on the fortress the morning fog would still hang thick but now all lines of sight were clear and all eyes were free to observe the trees spring to horrid, wormy life. The boughs and branches quivered and became unnaturally animate as an undead mob spilled onto the clear-cut plains.
   “Hold position!” Cried Cerol. “Infantry, protect the archers!”
   The huddled mass of sharpshooters fired outward often scarcely missing their protectors in an effort to cease the relentless advance of the rotting horde. Screams of exertion, horror, and insatiable hunger filled the air as the wave of festering legions collided with a  wall of dwarven shields. Blades, hammers, maces, spears, and axe heads all lashed out with deadly intent crushing bones, severing limbs and impaling the inexpert but tenacious opposing army. As those frightful creatures were held off balance by the infantrymen crossbow bolts peppered them quickly thinning their numbers. In the earliest moments of the engagement the dwarven defenders held the clear advantage and eagerly decimating the first wave with the defenders suffering sparse and minor injury.
   But the ghastly tremors of the forest did not cease and the flow of animate, decomposing warriors quickened. Soon every fallen abomination was replaced by two more of his kind and they charged with nightmarish persistence towards the defenders. The warriors of Arrowstockades were the fiercest of Dwarven kind but even the greatest of their ranks could not boast indefatigability in the face of mortal combat. As the defenders grew slower and their attacks less precise the blighted strikes of the unliving began to find purchase.
   Cries of pain rang out as the first defenders began to fall. Fueled by unspeakable magics the undead possessed seemingly infinite strength and even dwarven armor buckled under their blows. When the hard shell of the defenders held out rotten hands grasped at limbs and began twisting, pulling, bending and otherwise mangling their quarry. The most expert fighters did their part to protect the wounded but a black chill suddenly tainted the air and the twice dead invaders began to rise again. Bodies were quickly torn apart, their armor largely ignored and even the most expert combatants could not hold off for long. Soon the spark of undeath found the very warriors who had come to resist the invasion. The forces of Arrowstockades had begun to turn against themselves.
   The battlefield soon grew slick with fresh blood and vomit as both sides faced massacre. The trees were decorated with undead limbs and offal some of which would occasionally be compelled by an unseen gesture to rejoin the fray. The mutilated dwarven dead began to pile up in greater and greater numbers. The armies of Arrowstockades were the most fearsome on the planet and their commander known and feared the world over. Law-Givers, princes, and even demons claiming to be gods had come to Arrowstockades in an attempt to wrest control from it's Dwarven masters and they had all found their end burned to ash and turned into brilliant glass gems.
   But the dread necromancer Kopoh Torturedrest had been a general in a forgotten age and his knowledge had not been diminished by the gulf of ages. His conquest of the northern regions had been unrelenting and precise. His forces had grown to unimaginable strength and no elven, human, or dwarven army had posed any real resistance. So long as he controlled it the attackers were truly unstoppable.
   “First Infantry!” Echoed the voice of Cerol. “On me, we hunt the necromancer!”
The sight of their comrades being slaughtered, the seemingly infinite scope of the dark army, and their commander departing shattered morale. Without their dark master the soldiers of Arrowstockades collapsed into anarchy soldiers and captains cried out issuing conflicting orders to the headless army.
“Break rank!”
“Scatter or we're all doomed!”
“Hold the line!”
“Back to the gates!”
“Every dwarf for himself!”

The once rigid phalanx was instantly reduced to a cloud of scattering dwarven particulate as the squads were torn between fighting on, fleeing, attempting to return to the fortress, and in the case of the baboons staring in horror at the charging undead army.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #272 on: July 16, 2014, 05:24:44 am »

ptw. This story is of the highest quality.
I'm totally willing to help edit the final product, starting whenever.
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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #273 on: July 16, 2014, 12:00:26 pm »

ptw. This story is of the highest quality.
I'm totally willing to help edit the final product, starting whenever.

Right now I'm sure there are typos and misattributed names everywhere that have already survived multiple read throughs by me. If you could point any out I'd really appreciate it.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #274 on: July 16, 2014, 01:14:09 pm »

Dang it!  You're only allowed to post in your own thread with an update!  j/k

Love this story.
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I'm new to succession forts in general, yes, but do all forts designed by multiple overseers inevitably degenerate into a body-filled labyrinth of chaos and despair like this? Or is this just a Battlefailed thing?

There isn't much middle ground between killed-by-dragon and never-seen-by-dragon.

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« Reply #275 on: July 16, 2014, 02:09:12 pm »


The fiercest dwarves held their ground and with unparalleled skill dodged blocked and parried incoming strikes but the bulk of the force could manage no such feats and were forced to flee in increasing numbers. Just as the baboons prepared to scatter a command was barked in a sharp clear voice.

   “Baboons!” She didn't dare turn her back on the undead to see the speaker “There's a hill just south of here! Stodir, Iral, Angzak take the front!”

   The three most melee proficient baboons rushed to hold off the attackers while the others walked backwards firing opportunistically to cover their organized retreat. Most of the undead joined in the wave attacks against the most expert infantrymen but a few broke off from the main group to hunt the fleeing dwarves or attempt to stop Cerol's assault on their dark master. Even so their vast numbers forced Dumplin to lash out with the butt of her crossbow no fewer than seven times to parry a strike or stagger a shambling corpse.

   The battlefield rapidly degenerated from disorganized to absolute anarchy. The rigid mass that had approached the forest was gone and now replaced by small clusters of dwarves trapped in deadly combat with multiple undead. Dumplin struggled to focus on the approaching enemies and disregarding the others to avoid meeting eyes with the lone, injured dwarves crying out for aid.

   Cerol or Feb or any of their squads could have stepped in easily, a Dwarven Axelord in full armor had the power to save a life on the battlefield but the time it took to reload a crossbow meant death if they dared to engage the enemy before they reached their defensible position. The group found their high ground in a plateau bordered on three sides by lower ground and on one by the river. Avoiding a fight on two fronts was their only hope for survival.

   “Dumplin, Inod, Tath, take the east, Bim join me on the west side!” The commanding voice came again. Though still entirely alien it must by process of elimination be Degel's. Though the idea of the elf-fondling flower picker as a rock in this particular tempest was strange no brilliant strategies came to her mind. Resigned to death one way or another she scrabbled up the hill to her assigned station with the undead nipping at her heels.

Dumplin looked across the clear cut field and saw the group of attacking undead being reinforced by seemingly infinite legions of invaders and former warriors. Far behind her in the distance the great drawbridge remained tightly. Were her escape not blocked on one side by an army of relentless abominations and the other by a river deep and wide there was still no hope of finding safety. Dumplin contemplated the situation and decided falling on a cursed hill in a hopeless last stand against the infinite armies of darkness did not make a terrible end for a story.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #276 on: July 16, 2014, 02:10:13 pm »

Dang it!  You're only allowed to post in your own thread with an update!  j/k

Love this story.
Let me make it up to you.

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« Reply #277 on: August 29, 2014, 10:27:16 am »

   The creatures were savage and undisciplined in their attacks, it was rather easy to push them away with stiff kicks while loading another bolt. Instead of being slaughtered as they were destined on the plains the Baboons succeeded in preserving their lives longer than many of their dwarven brethren. Unstoppable and inexhaustible the horrors struck in growing waves of force 

   The superior position and tactics were enough to hold back the horrible hands grasping and striking hungry for dwarven blood. But like their brothers on the blighted plain the Baboons did not have the energy to maintain the stalemate for very long.  The monstrosities did not slow in their attack but the defenders quickly tired. Tath gave out a yell as her leg was caught and she was pulled, skidding down the hillside. Iral without warning dove into his boot and jumped into the fray, colliding with the zombie grabbing Tath and giving Degel the chance to pull her free.

   Quickly, Iral was set upon by the undead. His armor crushed and dented with grasping hands and biting teeth all searching for his vital organs. There came a wild howl of pain and fury spoken in wholly undwarven, blasphemous, and vaguely mocking tones as the warrior spat ancient curses even with the creatures beginning to mangle his body. Dumplin scarcely recognized the object in his hand until it sank into a rotten belly and the exploding bolt detonated.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #278 on: August 29, 2014, 10:33:06 am »

Sorry about the length I stopped the previous update at a stupid place.

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Re: The Increasingly Tragic Tale of Dumplin
« Reply #279 on: August 29, 2014, 10:19:29 pm »

Dumplin lives! But Iral doesn't :(
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« Reply #280 on: August 30, 2014, 12:50:39 pm »

We know they're all going to meet a bad end. The only question is how and when.
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« Reply #281 on: October 29, 2014, 04:37:42 pm »

   In a flash the cannibal soapmaker of Arrowstockades was incinerated and the fire quickly spread to the mob and out into the field. The burning attackers fell more easily and more definitively. Iral's sacrifice began to turn the tables and the enemies of Arrowstockades began to thin. The flames burned with horrible intensity swallowing up the attackers and reducing them to piles of inanimate scorched bones.
    Just as it appeared the Baboons would have victory a fiery claw lashed out as the angry, vengeful, horde began a desperate effort to scramble up the hillside. The flames wreathing their sizzling hands touched the dry grass and ,curiously at first, began to spread. The exploratory advance of the roaring inferno quickly became more aggressive and even as crossbow bolts peppered the attackers the Baboons were driven further and further back eventually coming flush against the cliffside.
   The cries for Degel's next orders were overtaken by the monstrous drone of the fire swallowing up the land and the baleful screams of the fiery dead. In a flash a burning figure whose flesh had come unseated by the intense heat exploded from the blaze and swung a terrible skeletal claw towards Dumplin. She quickly sidestepped but found with horror that her lead foot hung hopelessly in the air for a moment before her body fell, careening down into the chasm and river.

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« Reply #282 on: October 30, 2014, 01:55:02 pm »

D:

At least Dumplin (probably) won't become a zombie.
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« Reply #283 on: November 13, 2014, 08:20:49 pm »

Dumplin maintained the consciousness necessary to place her body between Obok and the river before she collided with the water rather inelegantly. It was a horrible struggle to reach the surface and twice as hard trying to keep Obok above the water line as well. There were a few tense seconds of terror before she got the hang of treading water in full mail and stabilized somewhat. She managed to strap her crossbow back to her back and free one hand to help stay afloat.

   A quick analysis of the situation found it to be as optimistic as any available in Arrowstockades. Her experience with armor allowed her a range of flexibility only slightly much much worse than she normally enjoyed. Further the light weight of the armor encumbered her only very very badly.  Luckily she was substantially better at swimming than a person that had already drowned. Her plate armor filled with water making her less buoyant and had an unpleasant tendency to drag. Fortunately she was distracted from this unpleasantness by the fact that even a momentary breach in her concentration would mean either her head or Obok's would sink beneath the water and this also meant she had only one hand to stabilize with.

   The waterfall created a deep area of water that was not as viciously paced as some other points in the river. Great walls of stone and earth towered four urists above her on three sides. Dumplin was no climber. She had innumerable trips up and down the Grand Staircase and it built muscle but climbing was a matter of dexterity, it was why a cat could climb as well as a dwarf of legendary skill and an ox could looks spectacularly silly a few moments before it exploded into fragments.  Dumplin imagined she could not climb the walls even if the walls were dry, she had not spent the entire day running and fighting, and she was not wearing armor.

   While the water here was fairly slow paced it picked up steam very quickly and if she entered a swift patch there was no possibility she would be able to escape the current until it slowed down again. It was possible that it would be a short way downstream or a short way downstream from the place where she would drown. Fortunately Dumplin formed a brilliant plan. 

   It was a miserable struggle but Dumplin managed to fight her way to the side and establish a shaky grasp on a damp , rocky, handhold. It still took considerable concentration to keep her grip on the wall to stay steady, kick against it to stay stable, and keep Obok safe from harm. So went Dumplin's brilliant plan. She was now delaying being dragged down river and still had no way of escaping. A secondary evaluation was equally sunny.

   Dumplin's grip on a bit of smooth damp stone was the only thing keeping her from being pulled into the raging river and swept away to almost certain death. Better still her physical and mental reserves were completely depleted by the events of the day. However in an unheard of blessing her current manner of certain death (drowning/smashed by rapids while drowning) was better than her previous manner of certain death (ripped apart by animate corpses and turned into a unliving monstrosity). 

   Just as things began looking up the first body hit the water.
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« Reply #284 on: November 13, 2014, 08:23:43 pm »

My heart stopped when I saw this, I love this story and I'm so happy your hopefully going to continue it :D
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