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Author Topic: Woman of SCIENCE! Transcendentia Dementia - Chapter 1, Act 1, Scene 1  (Read 3256 times)

adwarf

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Our experiment was going to be the first step towards transhumanism, the first step to achieving a world where no one would die, and where illness and war had no effect. The experiment was to take our memories, our feelings, everything that made us us besides the body that confined and doomed us and upload it all into a single place so it could be transported to another form. It failed.

Our entire being was uploaded successfully, but when we were returned to our original body something was wrong, the form we now had was incorrect, corrupted. Something had changed part of our being when we were uploaded, and now that change was changing the body we once had to correct this corruption.
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Dansmithers

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The experiment was an attempt to create momentary vacuum instability, causing a dimension gate to form.
We were partially fused with a version of ourselves form another universe.
We are now a part-cephalapod monster.
We hoped to draw power and resources from other universes.
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Siggy Siggy Hole!

Well, let's say you're going away from Earth on huge spaceship and suddenly shit goes wrong and you have Super Mutants. Social Experiments prepared them for this.

Dariush

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We tried to make cookies out of nothing. But the experiment failed and left us forced to procure them manually. TRAGEDY

mcclay

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Our experiment was going to be the first step towards transhumanism, the first step to achieving a world where no one would die, and where illness and war had no effect. The experiment was to take our memories, our feelings, everything that made us us besides the body that confined and doomed us and upload it all into a single place so it could be transported to another form. It failed.

Our entire being was uploaded successfully, but when we were returned to our original body something was wrong, the form we now had was incorrect, corrupted. Something had changed part of our being when we were uploaded, and now that change was changing the body we once had to correct this corruption.
This.
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Am I back? Its a mystery to everyone

wolfchild

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You attempted to graft DNA from multiple species into yourself, using yourself as a guinepig for a procedure that would eliminate aging and disease,
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You really can both sig it.
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GlyphGryph

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Woman of SCIENCE: A Story of Technological Transcendence in an Imperfect World.
Chapter 1: The Best Laid Plans Of Mice and Men...

Begin Act 1, Scene 1 - Revelations

Well, you try to scream. While that's what you think you are doing, at first, it quickly becomes obvious that it's more of a squeel than a scream. And that your body doesn't... quite seem to be working the way you expected it to... and the darkness. There's something over your face, something clinging to you, and stabs of pain in the back of your head.

You reach up, awkwardly, every movement of your body screaming to your brain that something is wrong. You claw at the thing wrapped around your skull, the plastic and metal and wires, trying to dislodge it, wrapping your fingers around it as you roll onto your back and struggle until suddenly, with a rip of pain and a large popping noise, you can see again, though your vision briefly flashes brightly before dimming and some sort of... static... seems to rush across your eyes before everything settles down. You didn't manage to remove the device itself, just the blinders that were covering your eyes. At least you don't feel so incredibly trapped anymore.

The world is huge. Your machine looms above you, blinking merrily away, and the distant door to your small laboratory seems to be a baseball field away. Some liquid (blood, probably), drips down the back of your head and out from under the metal and plastic object that seems to be fastened to your skull, staining the fur down the side of your neck. Your mind is hazy - your vision swims a bit as you look around, and you wonder if you're experiencing some sort of serious damage to your optical system. You try to get your bearings - table metal, stretching out before you. Wire mesh, and on the other side, your machine. Next to the machine, a chair, reclined, with your body on it, and next to that a computer keeping track of a variety of details.

Okay, take a second - you're a genius, you can handle this, put the pieces together. Figure out what is going on. How did you get here? What were you doing... the machine. Ah, yes, you remember.

Your glorious experiment. You'd finally finished it. The tests on your lab rats had been conclusive - it worked. You take a minute to review the theory and implementation: You'd built a device that could upload a mind, maintaining a link to a body so that the body could continue to be controlled through a wireless interface. Earlier experiments in digitizing minds had resulted in almost instant madness on the part of the mind transferred - containment in the computerized environment was insanity inducing, an instant and endless wave of indecipherable input you hadn't managed to get around, until you'd had an amazing idea - by maintaining the link to the subject, you could insure that the location of the mind was changed while the actual environment it perceived remained identical. From there, you could slowly introduce them, bit by bit, to additional stimuli beyond their existing capabilities, building them up into something more. Arthur, one of your test subjects, had proven this concept quite effectively - while there were basic limitations to the core structure of the rodent brain, you were not only able to greatly enhance his intellectual capabilities through gradual expansion of his consciousness, but, hile he maintained the connection to his original rat body, you slowly gave him access to control and feedback mechanisms for a small robot you'd built; the results were astounding. Eventually, he'd used his original body less and less, and you steadily increased his access to basic computational resources, and you'd effectively created an artificial intelligence at the level of a young child in a robotic body, all from the simple base of a rat.

It had been an empowering experience, and the potential it held for your own improvement was obvious. You went over the numbers, the requirements, made modifications, and you were sure it would work. Since you'd continue to have control of your own body, at least to begin with, you'd be able to control the machine and introduce gradual changes, just like you'd done with Arthur. You'd created a new input device, sat down on the chair you saw yourself still sitting in, made a backup of the previous occupant before resetting the machine to a blank slate, and selected yourself as the input target. It had seemed so straightforward, so simple, but clearly something had gone wrong.

You swish your tail back and forth, as you go over the individual minutiae. The settings, the configurations. Something had definitely happened - were you in the machine, now? Was this a product of madness, were you were experiencing some warped reality and were you rapidly losing your mind? Unlikely... all of the variables were correct, all of the settings, the parameters for basic structure, the resource allocation, the input, the output, the... oh.

Oh no.

The device. The device that attached Arthur's body to the machine. You'd never disconnected it. And when you'd configured the machine to read from your device, that was all you'd actually done - read from it. It wasn't configured to send anything back. Those settings were still as they'd been... before...

Your tongue runs briefly over your long, sharp front teeth. You rub a hand along your snout, sending your whiskers tingling. You drop to all fours and took a few hesitant steps.

It is undeniable. You screwed up.

You are a rat.

An amazing, undeniably incredible product of science, a rat being controlled by an uploaded mind from a remote location, but in all practical terms, you are a rat.

Well, that all makes perfect sense at least. You've figured out what was going on. But an incredibly important question remains. What the hell are you going to do now?
« Last Edit: August 07, 2013, 03:37:15 pm by GlyphGryph »
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wolfchild

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Brief panic attack
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You really can both sig it.
But... That would break the laws of sigging! We can't have everyone running around with the same quotes. IT MAKES THEM UNFUNNY FASTER!

adwarf

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Get free of all the wires.
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Toaster

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Obviously, the rat body is far from what we need.  Either we need to get back to our physical body or get fully digitized.  That said, check on our old body.
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HMR stands for Hazardous Materials Requisition, not Horrible Massive Ruination, though I can understand how one could get confused.
God help us if we have to agree on pizza toppings at some point. There will be no survivors.

Dansmithers

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Become RATGOD, LORD OF THE RATS!
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Siggy Siggy Hole!

Well, let's say you're going away from Earth on huge spaceship and suddenly shit goes wrong and you have Super Mutants. Social Experiments prepared them for this.

Kashyyk

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Test if we can still speak human with our inferior rat vocal chords
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Funk

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see if we can push the back switch.
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Agree, plus that's about the LAST thing *I* want to see from this kind of game - author spending valuable development time on useless graphics.

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Armok

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> Get to the keyboard
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So says Armok, God of blood.
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GlyphGryph

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Brief panic attack
Get free of all the wires.

Act 1, Scene 2-a - Missteps
You begin to panic. Your tiny heart races, and you start to freak the fuck out. Every feeling is alien and unfamiliar, every movement of your body, every thought in your head, is not quite right. You scrabbling at the hemlet it with your hands, managing to cause significant pain but not much else.

You need to get out of this device. You run to the edge of the tables, finding a wheel attached to the mesh along the edge. You manage to work your head in between two components, locking the helmet into place, and push away from it with all your might. There is a sickening slurping sound as the components drilling into your brain are pulled from your skull, but you don't hear it.

You don't hear anything.

You can't hear - you can't see. There is only an ever present calvacade of inaudible noise, indescribable sensations crashing down on you, over you, through you. You are drowning in a sea of unfamiliar sensations you can't even begin to understand, and you have nothing, absolutely nothing, to ground you.

Your mind breaks.

You crash into the water. You sink like a stone. You breathe deeply, the water entering your lungs, and you laugh. You laugh, and laugh, although no sound comes out.

And then you die. Slowly, at first, your mind begins to break apart. It sends off signals that turn into feedback loops, leaving large sections of your mind as little more than white noise. Other parts fail and simply shut down completely. You don't know how long it takes in the real world, but in here it feels like decades. Though you quickly lose any concept of what a decade means.

Eventually, there is nothing left that could really be called "you". When the machine is shut down by the men sent to reclaim your property, well, you can't even really call it murder at that point.

You have died.

see if we can push the back switch.
Reinitializing... you have been reset to Act 1, Scene 1
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Toaster

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One turn and we already died.  Go us!

Obviously, the rat body is far from what we need.  Either we need to get back to our physical body or get fully digitized.  That said, check on our old body.

^^^
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HMR stands for Hazardous Materials Requisition, not Horrible Massive Ruination, though I can understand how one could get confused.
God help us if we have to agree on pizza toppings at some point. There will be no survivors.
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