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Author Topic: Thawed (Wrapping Up)  (Read 112575 times)

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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #15 on: February 09, 2014, 04:10:08 pm »

Spoiler: writing (click to show/hide)
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You were planning to have a 15 year old magical girl kill Witches by drinking them under the table!? It's original, at least.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #16 on: February 09, 2014, 04:17:40 pm »

There was a spoiler built into the template, scap.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #17 on: February 09, 2014, 04:19:30 pm »

I finished. I think. If you would look over it GWG.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #18 on: February 09, 2014, 04:21:01 pm »

I, too, am finished. Please have a look at it.
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Suika, Drinker of Sake - Today at 9:11 PM
"...I really don't know why Cu chulainn made that last promise because he is physically incapable of keeping it in his pants, it is like his junk is some kind of unruly seamonster or moray eel telescoping out of its holster and harpooning ladies left and right"
Johnny Jokotaru sent Kars down under

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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #19 on: February 09, 2014, 04:27:40 pm »

Check mine, I think I borked it a bit.

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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #20 on: February 09, 2014, 04:36:08 pm »

spoiler=Kyle Johnson
Vital Information
Gender:  Male
Appearance:  Brown hair brown eyes looks like he'd charm the pants off anything
Mark:  A realistic heart that seems to be made of dried blood on the palm of his hand.
Personality:  He likes to seduce people. Mainly women. He's pretty cool about things.
Catalyst Emotion:  Pleasure
Oh god.

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Retreat:  Well, there's a reason the farm produced more that year...
So, you stuck around and helped out?

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Element:  Flesh
How did the farm produce more that year?

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Attributes
You're three points short.

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Seduction:  5
Of course.

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Farm knowledge:  1
Is that just knowledge, or is that actually...farming?

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Not done yet
I see.

Making a character. Will post here when done.
Ditto.

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Catalyst Emotion: Resolve.
Catalyst emotions are typically a little more...emotional.

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Background:Altrius typically spends his time meditating alone, though recent events has brought him into the public. He has managed to keep calm, but it was not easy, as he expected. Many people openly tried to anger him. He knows his luck may run out eventually.
What was he? A monk or a priest? A farmer? A craftsman or scribe? A lesser noble, or a younger son of a noble family?
(Remember, this is before the magic.)

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Curse: When Altrius was a child his father made a pact with a demon. In exchange for bountiful harvests, Altrius was made to be a vessel for the demon. The demon inhabited Altrius, but by some miracle he suppressed the demon.
Doesn't quite fit. A better version might be something like "Altrius's father sold his child to a sorcerer in exchange for bountiful harvests and the sorcerer gave him magic in hopes of him becoming his apprentice".
And then the sorcerer died later because a well-established sorcerer's apprentice isn't someone the army would be looking to recruit.

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Attributes:
Two short. I said 30 points, right?

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Stealh- 1
I'm...not sure what that is. Or how often the theft of any letter of the alphabet would come up.
(E.g, tyop alert.)

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Other:
Keeps a walking stick with him inscribed with his creed:
Destruction by fire, and rebirth in ashes, the phoenix knows its fate and embraces it.
Nice touch.

Check mine, I think I borked it a bit.
Yes, you have. You deleted everything after Vital Information.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #21 on: February 09, 2014, 04:37:18 pm »

It was implying Kyle magically made more meat.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #22 on: February 09, 2014, 04:37:50 pm »

I didn't... :P

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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #23 on: February 09, 2014, 04:51:17 pm »

Updated my sheet.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #24 on: February 09, 2014, 04:52:15 pm »

Updated my sheet. Should be a lot better now.
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Quote from: Discord
Suika, Drinker of Sake - Today at 9:11 PM
"...I really don't know why Cu chulainn made that last promise because he is physically incapable of keeping it in his pants, it is like his junk is some kind of unruly seamonster or moray eel telescoping out of its holster and harpooning ladies left and right"
Johnny Jokotaru sent Kars down under

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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #25 on: February 09, 2014, 04:52:45 pm »

Fixed mine I suppose?

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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #26 on: February 09, 2014, 05:02:59 pm »

I didn't... :P
I was joking.

It was implying Kyle magically made more meat.
Ah.

Updated my sheet.
Adds up.
A bit more data would be nice, but you have a workable character.

Updated my sheet. Should be a lot better now.
Could you please reconsider the emotion? Like I said, relatively passive emotions like "fear" aren't really good catalyst emotions. Things like fear, anger, passion, and such tend to be better.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #27 on: February 09, 2014, 05:03:49 pm »

Umm... GWG. You may want to look at what you said.
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #28 on: February 09, 2014, 05:04:19 pm »

Spoiler: Jack Reinsworth (click to show/hide)

Should be finished now
« Last Edit: February 10, 2014, 02:07:51 pm by Kansa »
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Re: Thawed (Characters Needed; 0/6)
« Reply #29 on: February 09, 2014, 05:06:25 pm »

Done, baby, done!

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