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Strik3r

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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #30 on: August 27, 2022, 05:27:45 am »

It most definitely turned out well, and it's clearly very, very well polished piece of writing, and i'd say it's just the right length.

We should reassure Feryi that things will get better.
Afterwards, we should explore the village by ourselves. Follow those auras of distress and concern, and see what they're concerned about.
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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #31 on: August 28, 2022, 01:02:53 am »

We should reassure Feryi that things will get better.
Afterwards, we should explore the village by ourselves. Follow those auras of distress and concern, and see what they're concerned about.
+1

I also liked the way you've done the writing.
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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #32 on: August 30, 2022, 01:53:31 pm »

You feel compelled to go and investigate, but first-

You motion for Feryi to stop. "I'm grateful for the tour, and the help you've provided so far, but I need some time to look around myself."

She nods, and shrugs. "That's fair.  I'll be around if you have any questions, or need help - I know more than you probably expect, so take me up on that if you need it."

"I'll take you up on that. I promise, though, I've taken your words to heart," your hand laid over your empty chest, "and I *will* make things better."

Before she can respond, you dissipate your form, travelling the distance to the market plaza as a wave of thought. You reform there, feet upon the stone, watching an argument between a mounted visitor and a farmer - speaking, you notice, for a large group behind him.

"You can't just ride in and take the entire food store!" the farmer cried out. "Most of the harvest is already over! We won't have anything for the winter!"

The visitor sighs. "You will have your remaining harvest for the winter. I can see your fields from here - as long as you are not incompetent, you will have enough to last through the winter."

The farmer speaks back, red in the face. "Barely, and that's if nothing goes wrong! At best it would be a lean, cruel winter. You..." he draws in a shaky breath, "you can't just do this. It isn't right."

The visitor - a tax collector, you infer - leans back on his saddle and shrugs. "The military campaign has been hard on the Army. Vilitag's very capital is threatened, and most of our food was torched with the baggage train. We will be taking everything you can spare - and I'll be deciding what you can spare." He motions to his escorts, and they lead their oxen-pulled carts to the mud-brick silos to begin extracting their stores of grain. "We'll be taking a look through the houses as well. I don't want to see anything hidden, or you'll face the proper frontier recourse." He nods to an armored man mounted beside him, a sword at his hip.

The farmers assembled stand their ground, obviously infuriated but unwilling to start a fight.

What should you do?
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He immediately begins to beavergoat the man quite thoroughly! At the very beginning, the man is mystified by James' actions, but his face quickly becomes a mask of horror when the procedure starts!

"OH GODS WHY? WHYYY?"

After a twenty minute session, the man is left white as a sheet, hairless and completely and utterly dead. James congratulates himself on a job well done!

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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #33 on: August 31, 2022, 02:56:10 am »

What kinds of powers do we have?

Also I have a feeling that killing these people isn't a good idea.
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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #34 on: August 31, 2022, 04:42:39 am »

That sounds like a very poor idea. But surely we can talk and interact with anyone, not just the villagers we formed a pact with, right?

Plead with the tax collector. Tell him that doing this will not earn him or his liege any goodwill with the people here. Do unto others as you wish to be done unto you, and all that.
If this doesn't work, we might wanna try another tactic. Make sure we have an opportunity to do so, if needed.
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« Reply #35 on: August 31, 2022, 04:51:28 am »

That sounds like a very poor idea. But surely we can talk and interact with anyone, not just the villagers we formed a pact with, right?

Plead with the tax collector. Tell him that doing this will not earn him or his liege any goodwill with the people here. Do unto others as you wish to be done unto you, and all that.
If this doesn't work, we might wanna try another tactic. Make sure we have an opportunity to do so, if needed.
+1
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« Reply #36 on: August 31, 2022, 10:11:23 am »

That sounds like a very poor idea. But surely we can talk and interact with anyone, not just the villagers we formed a pact with, right?

Plead with the tax collector. Tell him that doing this will not earn him or his liege any goodwill with the people here. Do unto others as you wish to be done unto you, and all that.
If this doesn't work, we might wanna try another tactic. Make sure we have an opportunity to do so, if needed.
+1

Can the tax collector even see us?
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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #37 on: August 31, 2022, 10:14:57 am »

Can the tax collector even see us?
I truly hope so.
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« Reply #38 on: August 31, 2022, 11:56:05 pm »

We should first assess whether the tax collector responds to our presence.  Next we should ask them who they are and what they want, in order to ascertain whether they can hear us.  If he can’t see us or hear us, we should tell the villagers to stall until we return and then flit over to Feryi and discuss the matter with her before returning back to the villagers.  If he can see us, we should do as Strik3r suggested and then go discuss the matter with feryi.  Either way, we should ask feryi whether there is anything in our power that we could do to help the villagers in the matter and what that might be.  We are a young kami.  Feryi may know more about our powers than we do.
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« Reply #39 on: September 01, 2022, 02:01:11 am »

We should first assess whether the tax collector responds to our presence.  Next we should ask them who they are and what they want, in order to ascertain whether they can hear us.  If he can’t see us or hear us, we should tell the villagers to stall until we return and then flit over to Feryi and discuss the matter with her before returning back to the villagers.  If he can see us, we should do as Strik3r suggested and then go discuss the matter with feryi.  Either way, we should ask feryi whether there is anything in our power that we could do to help the villagers in the matter and what that might be.  We are a young kami.  Feryi may know more about our powers than we do.
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« Reply #40 on: September 01, 2022, 04:31:50 am »

You move towards the tax collector to intercede - you wonder for a moment if you'll even be visible to him, but his eyes alight upon your Form as you approach, his expression confused at seeing you among the party (as far as you can tell, of course. You've been able to rely on reading auras up until now,) and in seconds you have the attention of his bodyguard as well.

You've dampened your more standout characteristics somewhat - your hair a duller shade of red, your skin somewhat more blemished, and some 'dirt' on your clothes for good measure. Ignoring the wave of dizziness follows, you walk before him and his mount and bow.

"Good emissary of Vilitag, please." You look up at him, the bright amber of your eyes unaltered. "Look around you - does this look like a community with great excess? We've already lost some of our food to opposing armies (a lie you supposed might be true) and we need what we have." Your voice drops to a low tone.

"It won't help any sense of goodwill towards the Kingdom if we go through a winter of starvation. Please, err on the side of generosity." For a moment he is still, and then -

You, receive a blow across the face. Of course, you don't feel any pain, but the sting of anger is immediately present. You start to pick yourself up of the ground.

You're immediately aware of the farmers rushing forwards in a mob, yelling and throwing stones. The bodyguard rides to meet them, running his horse along the front of their charge, sword drawn, putting them to a halt. He wheels back out to the tax collector. Their voices are whispered, but you can hear them carried on the air.

"Gartal, if you do that again, I'll let them have you. At least *pretend* to be a decent human being-"

"What?! I can't just sit there while some village peasant talks about treason. What trash, veiling it in 'goodwill-'"

"I don't care. Restrain yourself, or you're on your own." He clears his throat, and speaks to the crowd in a voice used to command. "We'll be taking what we're due and leaving. Bring your foodstuffs to Gartal here and he'll assess them. We will only take what we need for the army."

Ignoring the glare of his companion, he takes control of the operation, directing both the farmers and the (now quite nervous) caravan servants. By the time one of the farmers thinks to look back and check for you, you've dissipated your form once more, observing the goings-on from a comfortable bit of warm air above the sun-heated roof of a silo.

You realize that could have gone much worse. As loathe as you are to admit it, you're in over your head in these situations - while you've got some grasp of human nuance from the collective thought of the village, you hadn't guessed that the taxman would receive your reasonable request as such a grave insult. You can guess how, you think - your comment on good relations went over to him as a threat of disloyalty if he didn't back off.

You're fairly confident you could have repelled that single warrior if it came to it, but if they are running in advance of an army... if you were embodied, you'd shudder at the thought.

Concluding that the situation seems stable, you drift upwards into the air and let it carry you across the village. In seconds, you reform (with a growing sense of fatigue) some distance beside Feryi, in the prairie between the village and the forest. She turns to you, mushroom in one hand and a neatly-divided basket in the other. "A fresh crisis, or did you just want some company?"

You tap your foot against the ground, and find it a little difficult to look her in the eyes. "While I would not mind your company-"

"-something has come up. What's our situation?"

You explain everything, and for a short time she leans against a stray tree, staring up at the afternoon sun. "It's, survivable. It sounds like they'll stay content with raiding our grain silos and the few things folks'll bring up from their homes to make it seem like we're letting them at everything. Ultimately, what you did worked out, but - I'm sure you're aware it just as easily could have gone much worse."

You are painfully aware, yes.

She shrugs. "Luckily, nobody particularly wants to die or draw blood over something like this. But when it comes to officials of the kingdom," you can see her hands tense, "always assume they're heartless bastards. It's never done me wrong. They see anyone outside of the cities as a bunch of savages that exist only for looting and conscripting."

You maneuver to change the subject. "Well... what now? I don't want the village to face a hard winter. Is there anything I can do change that?"

"...Sure, we have options. We could sell off some of our possessions to the town nearby - it'd be a journey, since the smaller villages won't have enough excess themselves. You could take a look around the valley," she makes a wide motion with her arms, "and see if there's anything valuable we could send by messenger instead of our tools. Or," she cracks a smile, "you could try and get some of our food back before they leave the valley. They won't reach the pass before nightfall, so they'll be set up in a camp. If you're careful, you could ensure some of their baggage never leaves." She pokes you lightly in a shoulder. "It helps to be incorporeal, I'd imagine."

What seems best to do next?
You are, of course, free to pursue any action or plan you formulate and find suitable.
What questions do you have for Feryi beforehand?
It is worth noting she has significant knowledge of the nature of Spirits, and their abilities and weaknesses.
« Last Edit: September 01, 2022, 04:43:11 am by Inithis »
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He immediately begins to beavergoat the man quite thoroughly! At the very beginning, the man is mystified by James' actions, but his face quickly becomes a mask of horror when the procedure starts!

"OH GODS WHY? WHYYY?"

After a twenty minute session, the man is left white as a sheet, hairless and completely and utterly dead. James congratulates himself on a job well done!

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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #41 on: September 01, 2022, 04:47:41 am »

I like the sound of stealing back some of the stuff.
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Re: Guardian Spirit - Learn, Protect, Love
« Reply #42 on: September 01, 2022, 06:45:33 am »

You've dampened your more standout characteristics somewhat - your hair a duller shade of red, your skin somewhat more blemished, and some 'dirt' on your clothes for good measure. Ignoring the wave of dizziness follows, you walk before him and his mount and bow.

I think this was the big mistake here. I did not think to specify that we shouldn't pretend to be anything other than what we are; a spirit of fire, merely offering a bit of "wisdom". Although there is a silver lining to this. I bet the taxman and his bodyguard never realized they're dealing with a spirit, not a simple village girl.

Ah well, we tried the nice, warm and friendly solution first, and considering their response, now we'll turn up the heat, and they can deal with a pissed off fire spirit. But i agree that a covert approach is probably the best option.
As Feryi said, they won't make it out of the valley before nightfall, thus they'll set up camp. That's when we'll strike.
It feels like those caravan servants are the weak link, easily intimidated and probably prone to superstition. Lets make them believe they've been overcome by some horrible curse, come night. We're a fire spirit, thus it would be very, very unlikely we don't have some control over fire - Extinguishing it and amplifying it, possibly even simply igniting stuff out of nowhere - and fire is destructive. There's a lot of things we could do, and what we'll do specifically doesn't matter, only that we make the most skittish among them terrified for their lives and run for the hills - or even better, cause a mutiny - and remain undetected while doing it. Let none in the village know what we're planning.
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« Reply #43 on: September 01, 2022, 07:31:31 pm »

You've dampened your more standout characteristics somewhat - your hair a duller shade of red, your skin somewhat more blemished, and some 'dirt' on your clothes for good measure. Ignoring the wave of dizziness follows, you walk before him and his mount and bow.

I think this was the big mistake here. I did not think to specify that we shouldn't pretend to be anything other than what we are; a spirit of fire, merely offering a bit of "wisdom". Although there is a silver lining to this. I bet the taxman and his bodyguard never realized they're dealing with a spirit, not a simple village girl.

Ah well, we tried the nice, warm and friendly solution first, and considering their response, now we'll turn up the heat, and they can deal with a pissed off fire spirit. But i agree that a covert approach is probably the best option.
As Feryi said, they won't make it out of the valley before nightfall, thus they'll set up camp. That's when we'll strike.
It feels like those caravan servants are the weak link, easily intimidated and probably prone to superstition. Lets make them believe they've been overcome by some horrible curse, come night. We're a fire spirit, thus it would be very, very unlikely we don't have some control over fire - Extinguishing it and amplifying it, possibly even simply igniting stuff out of nowhere - and fire is destructive. There's a lot of things we could do, and what we'll do specifically doesn't matter, only that we make the most skittish among them terrified for their lives and run for the hills - or even better, cause a mutiny - and remain undetected while doing it. Let none in the village know what we're planning.
+1.  Just remember not to set the whole place on fire!
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« Reply #44 on: September 02, 2022, 03:50:02 am »

You've dampened your more standout characteristics somewhat - your hair a duller shade of red, your skin somewhat more blemished, and some 'dirt' on your clothes for good measure. Ignoring the wave of dizziness follows, you walk before him and his mount and bow.

I think this was the big mistake here. I did not think to specify that we shouldn't pretend to be anything other than what we are; a spirit of fire, merely offering a bit of "wisdom". Although there is a silver lining to this. I bet the taxman and his bodyguard never realized they're dealing with a spirit, not a simple village girl.

Ah well, we tried the nice, warm and friendly solution first, and considering their response, now we'll turn up the heat, and they can deal with a pissed off fire spirit. But i agree that a covert approach is probably the best option.
As Feryi said, they won't make it out of the valley before nightfall, thus they'll set up camp. That's when we'll strike.
It feels like those caravan servants are the weak link, easily intimidated and probably prone to superstition. Lets make them believe they've been overcome by some horrible curse, come night. We're a fire spirit, thus it would be very, very unlikely we don't have some control over fire - Extinguishing it and amplifying it, possibly even simply igniting stuff out of nowhere - and fire is destructive. There's a lot of things we could do, and what we'll do specifically doesn't matter, only that we make the most skittish among them terrified for their lives and run for the hills - or even better, cause a mutiny - and remain undetected while doing it. Let none in the village know what we're planning.
+1.  Just remember not to set the whole place on fire!
+1
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